Short story- Love parameters

“she loves me “, he said while stamping his legs on the ground.

In your dreams, she loves only and only me “, the other boy replied in stiff voice .

For a second or two ,there was complete silence in the room, They were both staring at each other angrily and panting heavily.

The storm was brewing and the clouds were thundering {nothing dramatic it was a rainy season} they both clenched their teeth hard.

She made my favourite dish yesterday remember??!! She loves me the most” , the first boy said

Oh really!!!, it was my favourite dish too and also yesterday she brought a new watch for me, remember??!, the other boy replied.

Now the things were going little out of the hand, they were about to engage in a fist fight , so eventually she had to intervene , she had a glass of carrot juice in her hand , “whoever will finish this in one go ,is the one I love most“, she said and smirked.

Both of them hate carrot juice and she knows that,

You drink it,she love you the most “the first one said

“No ,no you drink it, I guess you are the one she loves”, the other replied.

That’s when dad returned from the market , “it’s a humid day ,give me a glass of water, my neck is as dry as sahara desert “, he said while wiping off sweat from his forehead.

She handed him same glass of carrot juice. Dad drank it all as he was very thirsty.

The mother of the two smiled and the kids were startled , now they know whom does their mother loves the most.

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Published by vaniheart

I am learning to write stories , An introvert's attempt to express

51 thoughts on “Short story- Love parameters

  1. A story well told. I like the way you’ve expressed the emotions of tension at the begining and love at the end. Really good writing. I’m guessing the husband doesn’t like the carrot juice to but passed since he was really thirsty😏

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    1. We can say that the husband’s luck was in his favour otherwise the story would have started and ended with tension only.πŸ˜πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ Thank you very much for your opinion πŸ˜€

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